10 Jul 2015

invisible lines

tried to find your voice
but it slipped away
you're always on the edge
of saying what you want to say

you wanted to
breakthrough
and you attempted to
over and over again
but it's always, always the same
kept behind the
invisible lines
time and time again

you want to let 
your thoughts be known
but you stay in check
because you're so worried
about what they all think

but I think that
maybe someday
you'll be brave enough to ask
the questions that scare people
and the words that are
engraved in your heart
the words that have begged
to fall out of your mouth
will finally
escape

-T.H.
x

28 comments:

  1. tane.
    i am rendered speechless.
    how do you know exactly what to write that describes my emotions and feelings so accurately? so raw and beautifully written...never quit, darling <3

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    1. Autumn.
      I write what I feel.
      So I guess you and I have some things in common.
      I won't. And thank you, girl.

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  2. Tane, that was breath taking. Your words fill me up. <3

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  3. I am overwhelmed by the truth of these words. ♥ Wonderful job, Tane!

    xx

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    1. You flatter me ;) Thank you very much, Adi. (may I call you that?)
      x

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  4. Yeah, uhm. I love this. So darn much,
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    1. Yes, you. You, bae, thank you ♥ JKLDFjklkndnflaioekg.

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  5. That's amazing! :) Your poetry truly pulls me in.
    ~ Sanjana
    peridotcove.blogspot.com

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  6. wheeewwwoooooh.

    that was powerful, and amazing. thank you<3

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    1. xoxo - a million thanks, Leah :) - xoxo

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  8. This is so beautiful oh my. x

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  9. This is so perfect.
    And this is so true.
    Thank you for beautifully portraying our thoughts and fears so beautifully!
    Stay awesome as ever,
    Much love,
    Archie <3
    http://eeriefairy.blogspot.com

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    1. And thank YOU for all the lovely comments you leave on my blog, Arch.
      x

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  10. I love this.
    This is breathtaking and perfect!
    ~Emily

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    1. Thanksss sooo much, Emily! That means more than you know.

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  11. Amazing poem, you're a great poet.

    ~Rukiya

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    1. Awh Rukiya, thank you babe. I appreciate it a lot, really, a lot.

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  12. this spoke to my soul.
    i luh you taney.

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  13. Tane, You're the best writer I know. Don't ever stop <3

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    1. RADIANCE DO YOU EVEN UNDERSTAND WHAT A COMPLIMENT THAT IS. Thank you SO MUCH, Ray<3

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  14. Gosh, yet another beautiful poem by the loveliest girl.

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    1. Cindy, honestly, you're a babe, thank you very much. xxx

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