tried to find your voice
but it slipped away
you're always on the edge
of saying what you want to say
you wanted to
breakthrough
and you attempted to
over and over again
but it's always, always the same
kept behind the
invisible lines
time and time again
you want to let
your thoughts be known
but you stay in check
because you're so worried
about what they all think
but I think that
maybe someday
you'll be brave enough to ask
the questions that scare people
and the words that are
engraved in your heart
the words that have begged
to fall out of your mouth
will finally
tane.
ReplyDeletei am rendered speechless.
how do you know exactly what to write that describes my emotions and feelings so accurately? so raw and beautifully written...never quit, darling <3
Autumn.
DeleteI write what I feel.
So I guess you and I have some things in common.
I won't. And thank you, girl.
Tane, that was breath taking. Your words fill me up. <3
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Jordz.
DeleteI am overwhelmed by the truth of these words. ♥ Wonderful job, Tane!
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You flatter me ;) Thank you very much, Adi. (may I call you that?)
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Yeah, uhm. I love this. So darn much,
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DeleteThat's amazing! :) Your poetry truly pulls me in.
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Thanks mah darling.
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ReplyDeletethat was powerful, and amazing. thank you<3
N'aww thank youuu X
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Leah
xoxo - a million thanks, Leah :) - xoxo
DeleteThis is so beautiful oh my. x
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear ♥
DeleteThis is so perfect.
ReplyDeleteAnd this is so true.
Thank you for beautifully portraying our thoughts and fears so beautifully!
Stay awesome as ever,
Much love,
Archie <3
http://eeriefairy.blogspot.com
And thank YOU for all the lovely comments you leave on my blog, Arch.
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I love this.
ReplyDeleteThis is breathtaking and perfect!
~Emily
Thanksss sooo much, Emily! That means more than you know.
DeleteAmazing poem, you're a great poet.
ReplyDelete~Rukiya
Awh Rukiya, thank you babe. I appreciate it a lot, really, a lot.
Deletethis spoke to my soul.
ReplyDeletei luh you taney.
You sweetheart. You know ily too.
DeleteTane, You're the best writer I know. Don't ever stop <3
ReplyDeleteRADIANCE DO YOU EVEN UNDERSTAND WHAT A COMPLIMENT THAT IS. Thank you SO MUCH, Ray<3
DeleteGosh, yet another beautiful poem by the loveliest girl.
ReplyDeleteCindy, honestly, you're a babe, thank you very much. xxx
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