6 May 2015

I want to live.

And she let herself live dangerously,
Let herself live brilliantly and wildly,
She'd dance in the storm and with fire she'd play,
With that stubborn, erratic heart that doesn't sway,
In the wind her damaged wings still flying,
They tried to change her, they're still trying,
But she holds what she believes close to her chest,
Eyes that captivate, never looking back, only ahead,
'For,' she said, 'If I never take the risk,
If I don't fight the wars
and open locked doors
and give what I have to give
I might never learn how to live.
And I want to live.'

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30 comments:

  1. this. post. is. my. favorite. ever.

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    1. You. Are. Kidding. Right?
      Thank you, so much, Jordyyy!

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  2. that last line though...."And I want to live" Perfect <3
    This whole poem though was so inspiring :)

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    1. Thanks, Autumn, I'm so glad you found it inspirational.

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  3. This is absolutely magical <3

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    1. Hun, YOU're magical. Thank you so much. <3

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  4. This is BEAUTIFUL!!! I love it. I LOVE IT.

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    1. Thank you, Mariya :) a huge smile slipped onto my face when I read your comment.

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  5. Oh my goodness, Tane. I can't quite sum up my feelings. I'm in a every-comment-i-write-sucks-maybe-i-should-wait-until-tomorrow mood. But

    THIS IS TOO GREAT

    And I'll know I'll forget to write a comment tomorrow

    So it's amazing, Tane. Imagine a firework the day before July 4th. The laughter and rebelness of those people. That's what this is. I love it.

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    1. Candence. I don't quite know what to say either. But, thank you so so much...your comment gave me loads of feels. Thank you. xxx

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  6. I love this SO much because its exactly how I've been feeling recently ♥♥

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    1. Thanks very much, Vanshi, girl. ♥

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  7. Such a great reminder. Tane, please give me your skills. >.<

    xoxo Morning

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    1. Morning, you have WAYY enough of yo own skills, gurlll.

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  8. Oh wow. You have a way with words, this was gorgeous. <3

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    1. Thank you, Jo.
      Lookie who's talking. X

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  9. Wow. This is brilliant because it's pretty much what I'm feeling right now :')

    -nymisha

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    1. I'm glad you enjoyed it, but mostly, because you can relate to it.

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  10. everything about this is pure perfection.

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  11. So lovely. Just like you. <3

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  12. sdHWENFBOBVNJNSDH.

    "So, who's your favourite writer?"
    "Tane I'mnotsayingyoursurnamebecauseIdon'tknowifaweirdoisstalkingyou."

    Pretty much. Ilysmmmm.

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    1. slKLJDFKLASDFkljdlfjLIOipwlkralsdf. LKJKLD. Ilysm and yk it. You rock Annnnnn.

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  13. This is beautiful. This is inspiring. This is musical. This is flawless.

    Your posts never cease to spark my creativity, make me think. and inspire me.

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    1. You are beautiful. You are inspiring. You are musical. You are flawless.
      Thank you hunnnn♥

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