17 Apr 2014

I'm nothing without Him

Hi. I asked my followers what they would like me to post more of, and most of them said poetry. So here is an old poem of mine that I posted on my previous blog. (edited just a *little*) :)


When I stare out the window at the rain
And that helpless feeling grips again
I know You know I just want to give up
I know You know I’m not sure who to turn to
But then you let me know
I can always turn to You

When I don't know what to do
Everything is in a mess
Nothing makes sense
And I want to cry
Somehow you let me know
You are always there for me

There seems to be no answer to my frustration
Or my confusion that’s sitting over there
And I’m sure that somewhere around here
Roams my huge amount of despair
But just when I think it's helpless
You show me it's not

I’m like paper in a fire
Burning fast
I’m like Yesterday
Still living in the past

But then you tell me that you love me
And I feel like smiling again

I’m like a daisy
On a night of frost
Frozen cold,
My petals fall

But then you tell me that you love me
And a happy feeling sinks in

I know that without You I am nothing
I owe it all to you, my Lord, my King

10 comments:

  1. Absolutely BEAUTIFUL! This poem is so true, so wonderful, and so amazing! Wonderful post. :D\
    Grace xxx ♥

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  2. You are so talented! I love poetry! I am a new follower. http://eveofwomanhood.blogspot.com/

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    1. Thank you, Eve, so glad to have you as a follower. :)
      Tane xoxo

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  3. How are you even such a talented writer??! Just found your blog + love it!

    xx

    Acacia
    p-o-n-d-e-r-i-n-g.blogpot.com

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    1. aw, thanks very much, dear! you're very kind, Acacia.
      Tane ♥

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  4. Keep writing, Tane! Lovely...<3

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  5. Wow, this is so beautifully written! Amazing job. Love your writings Tane! <3

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    1. oh thank you, dear dear Cindy. you deliver wonderful comments and posts!
      Tane ♥

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